Puff
I took a few puffs
Sky developed more clouds, wow!
Ego was subdued
Clouds loomed over all
Downpour did not happen, why?
Ego emerged ‘gain
Tobacco and grass
Dud hallucination, high
I should have known that
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the poem is off of mainstream n quite intellectual
thanks for the comment. was trying to figure out if i can make a comeback to haiku writing.
simple composition with a deeper message.. I like it, bro!
Thanks for the comment.
“Words are sharp when carved
Sharper than the sharpest sword
Swords are now but blunt”
I enjoyed it light-heartedly (hasdai-kheldai), any inherent meaning was too deep for my little brain. But I liked it.
Good that you enjoyed, Sanyukta. Here’s a haiku for you:
“You play with colours
To capture world in canvas
An artist you are”
You play with colours
To capture world in canvas
An artist you are